@ Minato.
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 | | Subject: How To Make Better Posts Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:35 am | |
| Lets start of with an Example
"Minato walks down the street"
always explain why your character is anywhere he is.
Eg:"Minato walks down the street, he went there to go to the market place and buy some butter for his mother"
always describe your character's personality
"Minato walks down the street, he went there to go to the market place and buy some butter for his mother. He usually does not go to markets but since his mother was very busy that day Minato was glad to help her out"
Describe your characters emotions
"Minato happily walks down the street. he went there to go to the market place......He usually does not go to markets but as his mother was very busy that day Minato happily accapted to help out his parents so as to ease their lives by doing such a easy task"
Describe what your character feels,sees,smells,hears,senses,etc. Describe the surroundings of your character.
"Minato walks down the street, as he entered the streets he could smell the fresh smell of butter coming from the bakery shop, the bakery looked rather bright that day than it usually does......"
Finally, make better use of puntuation marks and use good grammar. thats it for now, will give more tips later. | |
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Elements: Lightning,Fire,Wind,Earth, and Water
Jutsu: Eyes of Paralysis, Eyes of Illusions, Eyes of Altering, Eyes of Destruction,Earth Style: Rampart, Wooden Spike Technique, Ultimate Wooden Spike Technique, Wood Element Transformation Technique, Wooden Bridge, Wood Restrains, Birth of a Dense Forest, Destruction Torrent, Hidden Mist Technique, Wood Clone, Wooden Barrier, Great Forrest Technique, Four Pillar Wood Prison, Four Pillar House, Wood Wall, Violent Water Wave, Earth Dragon Projectile, Hell Needles, Dynamic Entry, Earth Style: Earth Platform, Water Style: Water Wall, Rasengan, Starch Syrup Capture Field, Water Dragon Projectile, Water Dragon Missile, Water Dragon bullet, Water Prison Technique, Rasen Shuriken, Chidori, Teleportation Technique Custom, Flying Thunder God Technique,Hydration Technique, Ninja Art: Phantom Ninja, Ninja Art: Steel Body, Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu, Fire Style: Great Fireball Jutsu, Puppet Attack: Chakra sword, Puppet Attack: Chakra Strings of Death, Puppet Attack: Chakra of the Wind
Allegiance: Konohagakure
| | Subject: Re: How To Make Better Posts Sat Oct 31, 2009 3:53 am | |
| You truly are a dedicated member.
I agree. | |
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| | Subject: Re: How To Make Better Posts Sat Oct 31, 2009 4:01 am | |
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